Monday, June 15, 2015

Who's on, First? The Unreliable Narrator

Three bag ladies are standing in the parking lot of a Trader Joe’s market, a common enough sight in most cities.  Now, two men, Mac and Ben, push their shopping carts out of the store, into the lot, where the bag ladies are standing.  Mac and Ben have the satisfied look of guys who have earned big points because, for once, they’ve spared their wives the effort of shopping.  This would be time for a celebratory beer at the nearby tavern, except—

Except that one of the three bag ladies stops Mac.  “Before this day is over,” she tells him, “you will be named regional vice president of your company, and, ultimately, president.”

Not to be outdone, another of the bag ladies tells Ben, “You will never make vice president, but you will become regional sales manager.”

The third bag lady seems distracted, begins looking for her cat.  Soon, the women make their way off, through the maze of cars, leaving Mac and Ben to shake their heads in wonderment.

“Wow,” Ben says.  “Regional sales manager.  And you—President Mac.”

“The thing is,” Mac says, before they head off to the comfort of their intended beers, “ how they seemed to know about our work status.”

Sound familiar?  Think: Mac equals Macbeth, while Ben represents Banquo.  Think: Macbeth comes to Trader Joe’s, because next scene has Mac arriving home to find his boss waiting for him with news of his promotion to regional vice president.

Maybe those three bag ladies knew what they were talking about.  They did in Macbeth, because they were identified as witches and because, as the play develops, their vision proves out.  They were telling it as they saw it, but so far as Macbeth and Banquo were concerned at first, they were unreliable narrators.

By the time we’ve moved into the modern era, we’ve had encounters with scores of unreliable narrators, of all ages, social rank, education and profession.  Some of them, such as the teller of Agatha Christie’s famed Who Killed Roger Ackroyd?,  the principals of Gillian Flynn’s Gone Girl, and the first character of Paula Hawkins’ The Girl on the Train were deliberately holding back on information.  Had we known this information from the get-go, the story would have had a different outcome.

Other narrators were at times blinded by their naiveté to the point where we as readers could see things they missed.  We saw enough to make us wonder about the characters’ overall ability to report with accuracy.  Poor Mr. Stevens, the narrator of Kazuo Ishiguro’s engaging novel, The Remains of the Day.  For most of the narrative, he didn’t have a clue.  Even when he got a clue, it wasn’t enough.

Let’s go for an even greater extreme in narrator reliability.  Even though he’s never less that a sweet, bright kid, how reliable are we going to think Holden Caulfield in The Catcher in the Rye, after we begin compiling his activities these past few days?  This brings us to a question writers must consider in their portrayal of any character:  Does the character’s seriousness of intent mean we should trust the character’s take on Reality?

No questioning the narrator’s sincerity in Edgar Allen Poe’s memorable short story, “The Tell-Tale Heart.”  Yet, from the first sentence, he seems all too aware of his status as a narrator:  “TRUE! nervous, very, very dreadfully nervous I had been and am; but why WILL you say that I am mad?”

Two subsequent examples of first-person narration after Poe’s story, arguably Charles Dickens’ finest work of all, Great Expectations, and Mark Twain’s magisterial Huckleberry Finn, present us with two young men who have no reason for using what Twain called “stretchers.”  But can we, after careful, deliberate reading, sign on to the notion of these narrators’ reliability?

In a sobering test, can any of us recall with certainty the last time we read a book in which the narrator was absolutely reliable?  For those of us who tell stories, who among us is so certain of the last time one of our narrators was reliable?

Let’s look at some of the standards for reliable narrator:

1. Always tells the fact-based truth
2. Always tries to see the accurate representation of the historical background in which the story takes place
3. Leaves value judgments to the individual characters as markers of the characters’ personality

Considering these and other similar traits of the reliable narrator, we arrive at the confrontation facing all accomplished writers:  Reliable narrators are more often dull than not.

Neither readers nor writers want dull characters.  Even if a story calls for a character to be dull, both reader and writer want a memorable dullness, a quirky reliability.  So now, the truth is out.  Whether we are reader or writer, if we are forced by a story to deal with normality, we seek an abnormal normality.  More’s the point; we will not be satisfied with normal normality.
What a wonderful palette of opportunities this offers the writer for constructing characters to filter their stories through varying shades of reliability.  The effect on the reader will be stunning.  Here’s how to get started with the matter.

1. After you’ve finished your first draft of a short story or novel, determine where the story actually begins—not necessarily the first scene you wrote—and where it ends—not necessarily the last scene you wrote—then make a list of all your characters.

2. Rank these characters in order of their reliability.

3. Go back through the entire manuscript, looking for places where each of these characters could have been made to seem more or less reliable.  Consider from mythology Cassandra, daughter of King Priam and Queen Hecuba of Troy.  The god, Apollo, wishing to seduce Cassandra, gave her the gift of prophecy, but when she refused his advances, Apollo “edited” the gift to the point where no one would believe her prophesies, even though they were accurate.

4. Check to see if your story would have a better effect coming from a more reliable narrator or one less so, remembering the admonition “Well, less is more, Lucrezia,” from the Robert Browning poem, “Andrea del Sarto.”

5. Don’t be afraid to experiment.

6. Every time you read a story new to you, ask yourself how much you trust the narrator’s vision.

7. Look at the world of reality about you to see how much of it you trust and how much you find unreliable.

8. The next time you tell a story, remember:  the dynamic in which each character is seeing things as though he or she believes it.

9. Remember, you are only as unreliable as your last draft.

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